My biggest challenge was recognizing that I had to stand out from other students. To accomplish this I worked outside of school to enhance my directing skills. I also worked with my band instructor to improve my abilities. I never gave up in the face of challenge. I committed myself to extra hours practicing, despite a busy course load and family obligations. I never once wavered from my path and my vision. When I became field commander, I realized I was more than the average student. The marching band has more than 200 members, and there were thirty people that tried out for the filed commander position. I knew that my efforts had been worthwhile, and that I had been true to myself along the way. During my journey toward field commander, I studied directing patterns and used band music on CD's at home in order to practice learning the directing patterns. I stood in my living room with my family watching and giving me pointers. I knew it was important to take into consideration criticism and praise. Whenever anyone had something to contribute to my growth and understanding I did my best to listen objectively and incorporate their suggestions for improvement. I never once balked at the idea of changing my strategy or trying something a different or unique way. In the end, I was proud of myself for setting a goal and achieving it.

I believe my achievement...

Remember that an outstanding achievement is something different for everyone. For me I endured hours upon hours of practice. I set a goal early in my academic career and never wavered. I faced many challenges, but always did so with an open mind and an open spirit. I gladly accepted criticism when due, and worked hard to develop my skills and abilities as a leader and as a member of the marching band team. I wanted to not only achieve the best for myself, but also lead in a manner that positively influenced those around me to the greatest extent possible.
My accomplishment was outstanding. I know I worked hard to get where I am at, and I continue to do so on a daily basis. I am happy and satisfied knowing I will have something to be remembered by in the years to come. I know that my efforts were not in vain, and that every day I continue to aspire to accomplish the best and give everything I can to the marching band team. The experience has made me a more open minded and directed individual. It has affected me personally, but has also affected my community. I have built more lasting relationships with my peers and instructors. I have met members of the community by going outside of the school to enhance my directing skills and abilities.

Reference:

Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary, 1998, MICRA Inc.